Friday, March 6

Better << UNTITLED >>



Heart skips a beat

each time mobile buzzes

Not to show the disappointment

commanding brain urges


Eyes running here and there

for just a single glance

Coincidence or planned

just awaiting one chance


Spreading empty smiles all around

with lips shrinking each time

Undergoing some terrible punishment

without doing any damn crime


Heavy heart wanna discuss

to get valuable advices

Brain inhibits and makes a fuss

asking to be alone in crisis


Listening to good old songs

Pouring heavily on blogs

Nothing has helped so far

to forgo the loss….


Writing poem while in class

What has happened to me?

Who could ever win the war

against the destiny!


Is that all life’s about

crying over gone by days

Isn’t it time to start again

with the same attitude and grace


Time is the best healer

as they say

Hope it works for me

that’s all I pray :)

9 comments:

Mythreya said...

made me nostalgic..
i used to feel the same quite sometimes..
yeah time will heal dont worry!!

Anonymous said...

Time can never mend..
.Careless whispers..of a good friend..

See...George Michael can be wrong.

Time heals everything..err..even..yeah...everything

Unknown said...

yaar simply awesome.as i told you the second last para is very good.you know when i went to home,i was thinking about it.it is really veryy veryy true.isse kehetein hain dil se likhna.hats off to you.

Shruti Narayanan said...

@ Matty - Thanks.
@ Sorcerer - Understood ur point. thanks for that.
@ Ayu - i loved ur reaction when u saw it on the paper n i simply adored the seriousness with which u read it :)

Adisha said...

Living in the past never helps ... Try moving on ... Even re vising good memories too often, refrain you from living in the present...

A wonderful poem though... Time in class is well utilized :)

Cheers,
adisha

Karthick said...

well the poem does`t give much of detail about what exactly the trouble is, whatever it is I just wish it gets better and of course there is no better healer for all mental wounds than time. Just realize the fact " Nothing is, what it seems ...", it all depends on our perception and soon you will realize that bad is`t the worst that could have happened.

Shruti Narayanan said...

@ Adisha - points noted. thanks :) abt that time in class, he he...!!

@ Karthick - the details r not given, coz details r not clear.. i seriously am not sure what the trouble is.. but whatever... i just want this phase to be over soon. ya the +ve viewing of situation might help. i wil sure giv a try ;)

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Unknown said...

first thing ,yaar pic is chooo cute.main toh picture ko dekhte hi samajh gayi thi ki what will be the matter of the blog.
beautiful(with feelings and exprssions) poem.