With still 24 hrs left for the dead-line, I didn't want to make a last minute entry. I wasn't planning to participate coz sumhow I wasn't managing to get enough time for the thought process but then my mom says 'Participating is half victory'. N i didnt want to lose without participating, so here goes my scribbling....
A summary of the "cool" "cool" things I do in summers, a few reasons y I love summers!!
Lying on momma’s lap,
Eating curd-rice from her hands
Waking up dad, 1 at night,
Demanding for ice-cream.
To giggle seeing him crying
Wishing he would do the same,
Unfortunately he is too lame.
Playing splash-splash with little drops
Till mom warns to break the door,
If I don’t rush out.
Dad gets dozens for me!
Lemon and orange juices
Works wonder to beat the heat.
As usual forgetting the sun-screen
Pledging not to repeat the mistake again,
But then the same routine.
Adoring, admiring n praising
Loud music and full on speed
Overtaking the bikers are thrill indeed!
In the name of gardening.
Watering n taking its care,
Loving to see it smile at me!
With a small little knife.
Amazed to see it getting disappeared,
But I kept it pending for tmrw night!
In loose tees n tracks
Noticing the number n kinda guys following
Ofcourse without their knowing.
Passing sarcastic smile,
On the stupidities that people do
Wearing goggles while driving cars
To guys in pink t-shirts posing to be cool!
Winters were never so cool
With the Prince Charming walking hand in hand,
In the cool cool heavenly dreamland ;)
P.S. @ other Contestants , am very sorry I didn't go through any of the entries but I had my own reasons:
1. I didn't want any influential shadows in my work
2. I seriously didn't get time!!
But I promise to peep in all those entries b4 results r out :)
.jpe)
10 comments:
Shruti,
Nice one. Hope you win.
Take care
PS : Have you visited my recent post?
Very vivid imagery!
I assure you even I wouldn't be able to come up with something like this... each person has his/her own forte. The major virtue of this is its adorable simplicity!
Good luck to you too!
I for one, thoroughly enjoyed the fact that you put everything about the summer in such an amazingly, cute summary :)
very smple summary of things ppl actually do in summer.
noticing guys looking at you and keeping a count??? so who was it tht was staring, you or them? :P
Cheers
CRD
@ Jack - thanks for the comments
@ Sagar - tru tru... n this is what we learn to appreciate in such competitions... when u get to c so many write-ups on one topic that too so vastly different ideas... loving this blog world with each passing day!!
@ Adisha - so sorry for not checking urs still... studies taking al the time! wil check up soon n thanks!
@ CRD - lol i dont stare... just notice the stares ;)
Wow!! Never read a poetry of urs, a hot summer poetry was certainly cool,really maintained the theme of the content and rhyming very well!! kudos yaar, all the best of the contest!!
simple but effective.
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Good one.... :)
"Goggles while driving cars..." :D
All the best for the contest... :)
Thanks everyone.. lost the contest but won a badge :D
Hope to participate in more such contest n win more badges ;)
hey!!! nice one..
I missed out on the contest ; cuz i was busy(or pretending to be).
lovely!!!
update your blog re.
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