Saturday, January 23

~ Unspoken words ~



What is there for me to cry for

when u too could feel my pain

what is there for me to hate u for

when u understood it all so plain.


I knew this day gonna come

I will lose the rights to think about u

I tried to pull as far as I could

my feelings were ever so true.


I wish I had never felt all that

I wish I hadn’t said all that

I wish I hadn’t fallen so badly

why did we had to part off so sadly?


words will never be enough

to convey what I felt

my wet eyes tried to speak

if only I had let u see


I wanted u to stop me

not let me just walk away

there was still so so much

for me to say !!


U were all I was living for

U were all I was waiting for

guess I lost my destination

walking in the path of success.


A day changed my life

A moment changed my world

I started hating myself

for not giving u enough.


If I were indeed a 'perfect computer'

true to what u once said,

it would have been so much easier for me

to delete u from my memory.


Sigh! Am a human being

I got a heart inside

and this pain is too hard on me to take

help me someone, for god’s sake!

12 comments:

neha said...

Wow...
Wonderful post yaar...this really really touched me at the bottom of my heart...

every line really hits home...
If this really reflects ur current state of mind..then i guess we cud talk abt this sweety...

Adisha said...

Hey ... U seem to be in a volatile state of mind ...

How are you ? Long time ... I know. I got back coz of u only. Check out my blog if you have time.

Cheers ...

Jack said...

Shruti,

I was away from this space for a while. Read all pending posts and am surprised how I missed one on My Life, My Way. Do have principles in life but have flexibility too. There has to be a proper balance between work and fun. No need for New Year resolutions, just follow your conscience and do what it permits you. Is this poem composed by you? One needs to be human and that has to be accepted by others. No need to be a robot.

Take care

Shruti Narayanan said...

@ Neha - thanks girl!! i know u r thr n its a g8 strength for me. just giv me sum time to try my hands on things, then will surely talk.

@ Adisha - am good. ya long time i know. missed u n i did read ur blog. wil send in comments shortly, wasnt in a mood for that earlier.

@ Jack - thanks sir. its always such a pleasure to recive ur comments. yes this poem is composed by me n i feel its one of my best work ever :)

Adisha said...

Thanks for your comments dear. Do check out the new post of mine as well ...

I hope it can meet my usual standards ;) :) Cheers ...

Unknown said...

That was beautiful!

Hope all is fine at ur end.
Tk cr!

Rohit Dassani said...

Nice one there lady!! :)

Sorcerer said...

hmm..what happened?

every line says about the inner you.

:)hope things are fine at your end

Unknown said...

Before saying anything else,I would first congratulate you on your best work. Yaar,I would say this is really special for me also. Hats off to you yaar. Now,some serious talk.I want to share a very good message sent by ankur bhaiya

'NO and YES are two short words that need a long thought. Most of the troubles in life are a result of either saying NO too soon or YES too late.'

Yaar,I can not see you like this(side effect of last two stanza)and I wont allow you to spoil your life. Now,I won't say anything else because action speak more than words.

But for the post:
amazing, briliant, fantabulously fantastic, excellent.

Cheers to you ,cheers to you yaar.

Shruti Narayanan said...

@ Akanksha - ya things r much better now. thank u.

@ Rohit - ah! thanks.

@ Sorcerer - ya just the usual ups n downs of life... things r back on track now.

@ Ayu - i was so eager to read ur comment on this one yaar. haan as i said n u agreed too, this is certainly my best work. and ofcourse, ankur bhaiya as usual ek dam apt msg send karteen hai. u dont worry abt me. u know me well enuf to expect me to shatter down for such things. i wil b absolutly fine n i wont ever spoil my life. cheer up yaar!!

Vinayak said...

great poem
this blog rocks

Karthick said...

So then, i am commenting on this beautiful work of ur so late, but still, when i wen through it again, i remembered every word u have used in it.Yes, by far ur best in ur blogs and honestly, very deep.
Its nice to see u have undergone a evolution in ur emotions, i was taken aback by the new template and reordering on the page.
So , life moves on , and am sure ur gonna write more poems not only deep but also on more successful stories in ur life.

Fabulous work..!!